December 16th, 2007

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Birth of Friends

Title: Birth of Friends
Fandom/Pairing: Star Wars/Obidala (Obi-Wan Kenobi/Padmé Amidala)
Written For: 12 Days of Obidala Christmas @ the Obidala Fan Forum
Prompt: Christmas Fic/#015 Pause
Characters: Obi-Wan, Padmé
Word Count: 1,551
Rating: G
Summary: After the battle to liberate Naboo, Padmé makes a new friend.
Author’s Notes: For the second day of Obidala Christmas, I’d like to offer up a couple of deleted scenes from my multichapter fic, To Ignite the Stars. This first one isn’t a deleted scene, per se, in that it takes place before the time period in which the fic begins, but I hope you’ll still enjoy a look back at one of the events that brought Obi-Wan and Padmé together in this particular AU. You know you’re into a fic you’ve created when … you start writing deleted scenes for it. XD This is the second in my series of fics for the Twelve Days of Obidala Christmas at the Forum. As I did with the first one, I've also made this a part of my fanfic50 claim.

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To Ignite the Stars Deleted Scene: Future's Holdings

Don't get too excited now, people ... this is unfortunately not another chapter of To Ignite the Stars, although damned if I don't wish it was. I'm having a real fight with Chapter 18 and the various battle/action scenes contained therein, so until I sort those out (hopefully within the next couple days), there won't be an update.

But for those of you who aren't members at the Obidala Fan Forum - or who are but don't mind reading this again - I can offer up a little deleted scene from Chapter 15. Before you go yelling, "Good grief, why on earth did you cut this scene???" (as a certain Ladybug at the Forum did), let me explain. At the point this scene would have occurred, Chapter 15 was already over 7,000 words long, and 5,000-6,000 is pretty much my limit as to how long I think these chapters should be. So I had to rearrange the outline a little, move some material over to the next chapter and chop some other stuff, and unfortunately the tub scene had to go. But hey, what's Christmas without a few surprises here and there? I thought some of you would like being surprised with a little smut. XD

Title: Future's Holdings
Fandom/Pairing: Star Wars/Obidala (Obi-Wan Kenobi/Padmé Amidala)
Written For: Technically, To Ignite the Stars, but I made it fit the 12 Days of Obidala Christmas @ the Obidala Fan Forum and my fanfic50 claim.
Prompt: #005 Destiny
Characters: Obi-Wan, Padmé
Word Count: 600
Rating: NC-17 for sexual scenes
Summary: During their vacation on Naboo, Obi-Wan and Padmé take a bath and make some plans for their future.
Author’s Notes: This is the second TIS deleted scene (the first being the Phantom Menace one I posted earlier), occurring as it does during the time that Obi-Wan and Padmé are visiting Naboo as a couple for the first time. I have to admit I stole the bathtub idea rather shamelessly from lazypadawan, heh. The difference here is that I’ve put a decidedly Obidala-ish spin on it.

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